;fob of] jif{ d df; 5g{ hfG5'xf]nf
clx+;f , cGofo / cTofrf/ ;xg g;s]/
o:tf] vf]s|f] / IfL0f b]zsf] ;]js eGg nfh nfu]/
b]zs} ul/dfdo kbdf j;]sf pRr JolQmx?sf] e|i6frf/ ;xg g;s]/
;fob olx jif{ d df; 5g{ hfG5'xf]nf .
O0l8of 6'8]sf] "g]kfnu]d Knfg d OG6/g]6df x]g{ ;lSbg
6gsk'/ / u08sL d ef/tsf] eGg ;Slbg
nId0fk'/ jfwn] n]/fpb} u/]sf] kl/0ffd ;fob d e'Ng ;Slbg
g]kfnL g]tfsf] ef/tk|ltsf] em'sfj d ;xg} ;Slbg
;fob olx kL/n]g} d of] jif{ df; 5g{ hfG5'xf]nf .
lzj/fqLnfO{ valentine day n] 5f]k]sf] d}n] b]lv;s]
gjjif{nfO{ new year n] lgn]sf] d}n] cg'ej ul/;s]
ljb]zL wd{n] g]kfnLsf] cf:yf lsg]sf] d}n] x]l/;s]
;fob olx rf]6 ;xg g;s]/ d of] jif{ df; 5g{ hfG5'xf]nf .
k|ltjfb ug{ vf]h]s} lyPF t/ ;fy s;}sf] kfOg
6gsk'/ cfˆg} xf] eGb}lyP t/ s;}n] xf] df xf] ldnfPg
cFufng ;fyL cfˆg} ;+:s[lt eGb}lyP , t/ PSnf] j[x:klt kf] jgfOlbP
;fob d /fi6«jflb, /fi6«k|]dL / /fli6«otf ePsf] dfG5] eP/ xf]nf
pgLx?n] dnfO{ of] jv{ df; 5g{ hfg jfWo u/fpg] eP
/ d]/f cfkmGtn] klg dnfO{ of] jif{ u'dfpg] g} eP ..
I had written this poem when I was in grade 8. It was the time when I was 13 years old. I can't believe that I was that much 'rastra bhakta 'at that time. My father used to teach us in school and in classroom he always talked about nation and his lectures always made us feel proud towards our country.In school we used to write lots of poem and whenever I started to write poem 'Nepal' would come first in my mind.Now life has been changed, country has been changed , situation has changed and ofcourse my mind has changed.I am not a blind 'rastrabhakta' these days. There are lots of reason next time I will share it.But I am still surprised that is it me who wrote this poem? How come these things came in my mind?

8 comments:
Welcome to the blogging world Archana! Wish you continuity and success.
The poem has very strong feelings. It's natural in teenage. As we grow up and get mature, we get surprised by our own thinking at that time. I have felt similar with many of my writings.
Waiting for your next post.
I will add you in my blogroll.
thanks a lot .
waw archana ji its great you are absolutely right....
निक्कै राम्रो, वास्तवमा यो पत्याउनै गार्हो पर्यो कि यो कबीता तिमीले १३ बर्ष को उमेरमानै लेखेको भनेर ।
प्रयास भनौ वा शुरुवात भनौ निक्कै राम्रो छ ।
कबिताको मिटरमा ध्यान दिएर लेख्यौ भने झन सुनमा सुगन्ध हुनेछ ।
लेख्ने प्रयास जारी राख ...........
राम्रो छ र अझै राम्रो गर्ने प्रयास गर मेरो यही शुभकामना छ .................
निक्कै राम्रो, वास्तवमा यो पत्याउनै गार्हो पर्यो कि यो कबीता तिमीले १३ बर्ष को उमेरमानै लेखेको भनेर ।
प्रयास भनौ वा शुरुवात भनौ निक्कै राम्रो छ ।
कबिताको मिटरमा ध्यान दिएर लेख्यौ भने झन सुनमा सुगन्ध हुनेछ ।
लेख्ने प्रयास जारी राख ...........
राम्रो छ र अझै राम्रो गर्ने प्रयास गर मेरो यही शुभकामना छ .................
naam nabhayeko manche ji ra chiranjibi bhai thanks a lot for comment! huncha huncha aba meter ma ni dhayn dinchu ni!
Wow! really great poem.
thank u midesh sir
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