she is happy
In the northern part of our country there was a village called 'ramilo basti'. There lived a girl with her family. She was the youngest sibling of her parents. So she was liked and loved by everybody. Her name was 'Savyeta'. Like her name she was kind, did respect to elders and showed her love to small one. She wanted to fly in the sky, she liked to do painting and her hobby was to read books. She had read lots of book related to nature, animal, history, geography etc.
One day she came with a book in her hand from the school.She had borrowed that book from school library. She went to her room , locked the door and started reading the book. In the first page of the book there was frightening picture of black monster.There was no use of any color except black. It was very horrifying. She read few pages from the book and went downstairs to have her dinner.Everything was ready on the table. Her father, mother, brother, and sister were already there. They started eating dinner as usual.But today her father told a story about a terrible giant while having dinner.Savyeta was bold and courageous girl.She was not frightened from the story.She was not afraid.Instead she was listening the story very inquisitively.She liked the story very much.After the dinner all went to their room and savyeta also went to her room.Before switching off the light she opened the book and read it.It had lots of awesome pictures and horrible plot.She read it with enough curiosity. Then she slept. In the dream , she saw huge giant coming near to her. It came near to her bed and grabbed her neck and pressed it. Suddenly she came out from her dream and shouted.Luckily, nobody in the house heard her voice. SAhe was sweating and her blood ran cold. She slowly and cautiously put light on. And she came down from the bed.Her heart was still beating fast.She opened the window and looked outside. There was no one. She took long breathe and looked at the wall clock. It was exactly 12:00 clock.That night she could not sleep. She did not put the light off. She opened her diary and poured all her thing that happened in her diary. She wrote every details of her dream.In the morning she did not go down from her room.That morning her mother had to come in her room to remind her that she was getting late for school.Her face was pale and her eyes were red. She did not eat her breakfast properly and went to her school.In the school she sat on last bench and she did not even speak with her best friend Mamata. Her friends were surprised to see her behavior. They thought that something bad was happening with her. But no one dared to ask on this topic. She returned home alone and went to her room. She did not have dinner that night and the whole night he could not sleep.yesterday's nightmare was still in her mind. Her mother noticed some changes. She asked her if she had any problem.But savyeta did not share her problem. Her mother decided to see her diary secretly.Her mother read her diary when she was having breakfast and knew the cause of her distress. She talked about this with her husband. Next day was Saturday. Her father took all family member in the garden and started to talk. Their garden was very beautiful and it was very natural. Lots of colourful flowers were blossoming and small bees were sucking nectar of flowers. Savyeta felt relaxed in that environment.She roamed around the garden. She was trying to forget her dreadful dream.Her father and mother called her near to them and hold her hands. "Are you feeling happy?",he said to his daughter. Saveyeta looked at her father and wondered why he was asking her this question. Did he know about her unhappiness? But she did not say anything to her father. There was silence for a while. "Do you believe in monster or giant?", father broke the silence.Savyeta looked at her father and bowed her head. She wondered how her father knew about her tension but she could not gather courage to ask her father.She tried to forget that black monster of her dream and tried to enjoy the scenic beauty of garden.Now, her mood was changed and she became romantic.She started to talk with her brother and went near to her father.Her father said,"you r now in the garden.Here you can not see anything scaring in this environment.You are happy now. Isn't it savyeta?" "Yes dad. I am feeling relaxed today. I am happy .You know from last few days i was in tension.A dreadful giant lived in my mind and i could not get rid of it.Now i have taken it out from my mind and i am also convinced that whatever you read in the books is always not real.We should not change our mind reading the different stories of the book.Stories are written from the imagination of the writer.Sometime it is written based on real incident and sometime not.The book which i read was written about a giant.I should not get afraid of reading books.For a short time i forgot all these things and believed what was written in the book as a true story.", replied savyeta. Father was very happy by her daughter's thoughts. Her parents were happy because they succeeded to solve their daughter's problem without giving her any tension.All family went watch cinema that evening to enjoy their holiday.

10 comments:
nice and profound story abt the girl's fear n' her prudent behaviour to overcome it!
this will be an inspiring story for children 2 fight their fear.........
also a must read for adults tooooooo.....
hey this story was interesting and child encouraging one....let all the child have a look at it once.
wow derai ramro chha keep it up
really nice one..hope that archana will let us to read more on such story..in comming day..good luck archana ji...
Oh good one.
ya really a good one.
# thank u bibhuti
# madhu je thanks for reading!
# ganesh bahi le chai padhdai napadhi comment haldeko ho!! heheh dont mind! bhai lai jiskako ni
# arko ganesh thank for reading
# midesh sir thanks a lot
Nice narration!
Being a female yourself, u could faithfully produce female psychology. Women r more imaginative than men. Therefore, the imaginary giant horrified Savyeta. Her mind projected it as real. The family saved the day for the girl. Nice way of telling the story. But now u should concentrate on description. This story runs fast but remember that there r junctions in the middle of each journey. U have to stop and watch them carefully. But I laud ur effort. Keep it up!
thanks bindesh jee!! u understood it another way. it was not in my mind when i was writing it!and yes i also felt that the story is somewhere incomplete and needs more description.again thanks for constructive feedback.
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